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Refined and simplified title: Stur Coconut Water & Pineapple Flavoring Drops, 1.62 fl oz Bottles (Pack of 3)
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| Attribute | Value | ||||
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| is_discontinued_by_manufacturer | No | ||||
| package_dimensions | 4.8 x 4.4 x 4.4 inches; 9.6 ounces | ||||
| best_sellers_rank | #179,828 in Grocery & Gourmet Food (See Top 100 in Grocery & Gourmet Food) #190 in Coconut Water | ||||
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